The reading passage claims that humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating. How animal manage to migrate? they maybe navigating by the starts. However, the lecture cast serious doubt on this claim by presenting some counter argument and examples. she believes that humpback use of the navigation it is fascinating and it is not very convinced. This view is amazing.
first of all, she argues that this way need intelligent and this animal has not this ability may birds and dogs can and they have its even though all dogs might not have this ability average dogs have this so humpback can not use starts to navigate. this, However, in contradict to the reading passage claims that humpback whales seem to be intelligent to use starts to navigate. Brains have a high degree to determiner of intelligence. humpback have ability seems provide a sound basis for the ability to use a complex and they abstract of sensory stimuli such as the night sky for orientation.
moreover, It is noted in the reading passage claims that humpback migrate in straight lines and the can maintain movement in a straight line direction for long distance so humpback rely on starts at night to provide them with external signs by which to withstand direction over long distances in contrast the lecture clearly states that it is varies straight line and it has sense and need external and it is force and body makes sensitive and humpback might feel starts migration.
finally, the speakers points out that spy-hopping is rare for animals and humpback look for hunting. so It is speculation. nevertheless, The text asserts that humpback exhibit an unusual behavior : they are sometimes observes floating straight up for minutes at a time, the head above the water as though they were looking upward and this behavior is known as soy-hopping and it is very rare among marine animals. humpback's function of spy-hopping is that the whales are looking at the starts, which are providing them with information to navigate. I do not like this theory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...d mating. How animal manage to migrate? they maybe navigating by the starts. However...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ing some counter argument and examples. she believes that humpback use of the navig...
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Suggestion: First
...ating and it is not very convinced. first of all, she argues that this way need i...
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Suggestion: This
...umpback can not use starts to navigate. this, However, in contradict to the reading ...
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Suggestion: Humpback
...h degree to determiner of intelligence. humpback have ability seems provide a sound basi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... as the night sky for orientation. \ moreover, It is noted in the reading passage cla...
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Suggestion: Finally
...mpback might feel starts migration. finally, the speakers points out that spy-hoppi...
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Suggestion: So
... animals and humpback look for hunting. so It is speculation. nevertheless, The te...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless
...look for hunting. so It is speculation. nevertheless, The text asserts that humpback exhibit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humpbacks
...d it is very rare among marine animals. humpbacks function of spy-hopping is that the wha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99101796407 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60101850527 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.284031622 49.2860985944 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582971898742 0.272083759551 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188910802783 0.0996497079465 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112821072272 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340648723834 0.162205337803 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724696229825 0.0443174109184 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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