TPO INTEGRATED 34
There has been some debates why the sea cows population decline. The reading provides three theories for the decline. however the reading oppose and mentions that all the theories have some problem.
the lecture says that the sea cows were massive creatures and one of them weight about 10 pounds. One sea cow could feed a whole village of Siberian people for a moth. But the reading refutes, saying that the Siberian people overhunted the sea cows and that leads to the extinction.
The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelp population. There were no evidence in decline in the whales. But the reading opposes said that the ecosystem cause decline in the min source of food for the sea cow. And that lead to the extinction.
The lecture says that the sea cow population were already in decline before the arrival of the European fur trader. Other thing caused the extinction. Yet the reading refutes saying that the European fur trader caught the last sea cow in the island.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cows'' or 'cow's'?
Suggestion: cows'; cow's
...There has been some debates why the sea cows population decline. The reading provide...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...rovides three theories for the decline. however the reading oppose and mentions that al...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...rovides three theories for the decline. however the reading oppose and mentions that al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at all the theories have some problem. the lecture says that the sea cows were ...
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.... One sea cow could feed a whole village of Siberian people for a moth. But the r...
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...ows and that leads to the extinction. The lecture contends that the ecosystem...
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...tion. The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelp pop...
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...The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelp population. Th...
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... cow. And that lead to the extinction. The lecture says that the sea cow popula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1373.03311258 63% => OK
No of words: 181.0 270.72406181 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79005524862 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34121196507 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502762430939 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3127680248 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 110.228320801 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 7.06452816374 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440891186984 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16145845522 0.0996497079465 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105197111402 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270510355106 0.162205337803 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701600416607 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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