tpo integrated writing 27

The reading and lecture both discuss the causes of Little Ice Age. While the reading provodes three explanations to support the causes of Litte Ice Age, the professor refutes, saying none of these are convincing.

Firstly, the article states that disruption of ocean curents due to the earth's warm climte caused the Ice age. On the other hand, the professor rejects this notion by saying that this ocean curents caused cooling effect at North America, but we could not explain the effect at other areas like Neitherland and Africa.

In addition, the reading shows that the volcanic disruption provides the air with a lot of dust that blocked the sunlight and cause cooling effect. However, the professor contradicts this point by explaining that volcanos could produce enough dust that make cooling effect. In addition, dust produce effect on vision too. For instance, colorful sunlight and gray or brown dust. However, we could not find and reports about these effects. So, the volcanic eruption was not strong enough to produce dust that could make cooling effect.

Lastly, the article avers that the dcrease in human population casused increase in the forest area due to less of agriculture. As a result, decrease the effect of green house. Nevertheless, the professor questions this idea by pointing out that stopping the green house effect was not enough time to work. This is becasue the forest soon cutdown again to give chance to crops to grow. Furthermore, the forest will not stay long enough to make global cooling.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07114624506 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38229446273 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.21131077 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269045084181 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887973928067 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068735648977 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156964027894 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457744678742 0.0443174109184 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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