tpo21
The reading passage states that, genetic modifiaction that use to change an organism's genes and hence has benefits. However, the professor in the lecture rejects point that made in the reading and further explain them.
First, in the reading, genetically modified mentined as a good process to survive trees.
In contrast, the proffessor in the lecture, refuses that and says it is unnecessory. Actually, climate causes create pests, so in this case all trees, will be diet.
Second, the reading passage claims that, genetically modifed has a economic benefit. In contrastly, the professor in the lecture explains that, it is too costly.If the company grow more trees, you will have to pay money to the company for a long time.
Third, in the reading passage, the aouthor follows that, genetically modified can prevent overexploitation, but the professor in the lecture rejects this point and says that it is a serious problem and with growing trees some recources will decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... states that, genetic modifiaction that use to change an organisms genes and hence ...
^^^
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organisms'' or 'organism's'?
Suggestion: organisms'; organism's
...etic modifiaction that use to change an organisms genes and hence has benefits. However, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ge claims that, genetically modifed has a economic benefit. In contrastly, the pr...
^
Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...lecture explains that, it is too costly.If the company grow more trees, you will h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 159.0 270.72406181 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2893081761 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75287839623 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 419.366225166 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5135118687 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245386761132 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100489742926 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747295080045 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13667009027 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593562574561 0.0443174109184 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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