In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their emplo

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In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent)of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring morestaff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company profits.
For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate.
Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities.

Many individuals living in the United States concern that modern company should provide a policy of work a four-day week who say this new policy benefits both company and employees' family. However, some experts can not stand behind this view.

Firstly, according to the lecture, employer would spend more their budget on training new employees owing to that the company need hire some persons to compensate the vacancy, if people choose work a four-day week.

Secondly, company would increase its cost on such equipment as computers, desk, et cetera. Undoubtedly, it is not good for company making profits.

Finally, were people to choose work a four-day week, they would face that their standard of life will decline. As company approaches to hire people who prefer choosing work a five-day week rather than those persons. As a result, those people will lose their jobs.

It is undeniable that performing work a four-day week will not provide a prefect condition for both employees and employers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
...ompensate the vacancy, if people choose work a four-day week. Secondly, company w...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
...fits. Finally, were people to choose work a four-day week, they would face that t...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at their standard of life will decline. As company approaches to hire people who p...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
...ches to hire people who prefer choosing work a five-day week rather than those perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 30.3222958057 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 163.0 270.72406181 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1963190184 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47741881291 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 419.366225166 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5499997222 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402354534318 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160674387817 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110096725467 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221949018588 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089989405305 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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