In the United States, it had been common practice since the late 1960s not to suppress natural forest fires. The “let it burn” policy assumed that forest fires would burn themselves out quickly, without causing much damage. However, in the summer of 1988,
The article is discussing about "let it burn" policy and its three possible damages and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor opposes the point made in reading and gives three reasons to support.
First, the article claims that the forest fire causes devastating damage to vegetation. However, the professor states that forest fire create new opportunities for other plants by making ground clear by removing other vegetation. for example, some berries and seeds. And plants species are become more diverse.
Secondly, the article states that due to forest fire, the wild life and food chain was affected. While the professor claims that fire replace some plants from the ground and these will creates good habitat for animals like rabbits and hares. Meanwhile, the predators who depend on these animals also come to that area and the food chain becomes much stronger than before.
Finally, the articles claims that the forest fire affect economy, as number of tourists avoid to come to that area, meanwhile local business also have to suffer. However, the professor explains that natural disasters like forest fire won't happened every year. It can be easily understood by example of Yellowstone fire in 1988. So the tourist can came back after or next year, and the economy won't get suffered.
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that forest fire create new opportunities
that forest fire creates new opportunities
the wild life and food chain was affected.
the wild life and food chain were affected.
that fire replace some plants
that fire replaces some plants
and these will creates good habitat for animals
and these will create good habitats for animals
that the forest fire affect economy
that the forest fire affects economy
meanwhile local business also have to suffer.
meanwhile local businesses also have to suffer.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 128 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.834 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.986 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.916 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
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