woman in a white dress belongs to James McNeill Whistler. may be written by another painter
The article states that the recently discovered picture of a woman in a white dress belongs to James McNeill Whistler. It also provides three reasons to support the claim. However, the speaker explains that arguments are not undoubtedly and the picture may be written by another painter.
To begin with, the passage insists that the work has been exhibited in London. That was organized by a friend of Whistler, who believed that a masterpiece is created by the painter. Nonetheless, the lecturer contends this point by explaining that this show consists of works of many various painters and supposedly the woman in white may be pictured by one of them. In the lecture it is said, that the picture may be shown because Whistler’s friend had it in his collection only.
What is more, the reading reports that the picture resembles another Whistler’s work. Namely, it is the symphony in white. We also learn from the passage that the painting has recognizable traits of Whistler’s style that he showed in “Arrangement in gray and black”. Still, the listening asserts that this style was board spread in Whistler’s life-time. Many of his coeval painters worked in grey and black tones. Furthermore, painting of a woman was a popular model as well.
In addition, the article claims that there is no signature on the picture, but there is a butterfly in the corner. According to the reading, whistler used a picture Butterfly of butterfly instead of signature in early ages of his career. Nevertheless, the lecture opposes this point by explaining that the butterfly is located in the wrong corner. Whistlers placed it in upper right corner whereas the butterfly on the work is in the down-left corner. Moreover, that has been shown that the butterfly was added later than the paint was created. Lecture states that it has been done in order to picture looks like Whistler’s work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, well, whereas, in addition, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06624605678 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94151478491 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2949565435 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5263157895 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296050474887 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856660080398 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104428231634 0.0662205650399 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21780598603 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170026792779 0.0443174109184 384% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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