Zoos
The article states that, the zoos are essential for a modern life and provides three reasons of support.
However, the professor states that there are conflicts about this issue and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the most animal lovers are used in zoos as animal keepers. The professor refutes this point by
that he states the animal keepers are not quite animal passionate and there are a several observation of lack of attention to poor
animals which cause severe problems for them such as finding two red panda dead as a result of inappropriate keeping.
Second, the article posits that zoos acts as a mean of education however, the professor says that they mostly acts as an entertainment
spaces. According to professor, they intend to attract the visitors for their own purposes. Note that they always shows a misleading exhibition.
Third, the reading says that the zoos try to help and protect the endangered species while the professor opposes this point
by explaining that their poor facilities and circumstances cannot lead to a good preservation. Also he states that the zoos and other related issues.
normally keep a small number of
animals which are faced extinction and he mentions that, they cannot bread successfully according to the Birth problems.
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- Important qualities of a co-worker 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. 70
- Zoos 76
- Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response.Your response will be judged onn the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typic 3
- TPO 46 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun observation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several observations'.
Suggestion: several observations
...quite animal passionate and there are a several observation of lack of attention to poor animals w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'panda' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pandas'.
Suggestion: pandas
...oblems for them such as finding two red panda dead as a result of inappropriate keepi...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
...er, the professor says that they mostly acts as an entertainment spaces. According ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...eir own purposes. Note that they always shows a misleading exhibition. Third, the re...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ces cannot lead to a good preservation. Also he states that the zoos and other relat...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Normally
...hat the zoos and other related issues. normally keep a small number of animals which a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...nd other related issues. normally keep a small number of animals which are faced extinction and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15813953488 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62327230739 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5 49.2860985944 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.09492273731 269% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21466206957 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101848430115 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106528854213 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854418631594 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093973621745 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.