Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction .one reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights,often to holiday destinations.
some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
do you agree or disagree?
Air traffic activities are advancing more rapidly than ever before.Such growth in this field may affect the environment especially regarding noise pollution.While some authors suggest taxing it will hamper it is further progress and reduces the negative side effects ,we need better options to manage the issue with good analysis of the sequences of sch decision.
As general using Airplanes as a mean of transportation ,is one of the most helpful innovative means of traveling ,it facilitates connection and it safes time ,for example young adults use to complete their education in another hosting country,trading .seeking treatment ,attending international conferences and for holidays .The claim that cheaper flights are the factor behind extra air traffic trips and hence noisy environment ,such statement has to be supported with evidence from researches to confirm that Air traffic activities increased because of low cost flights and not as a result of people needs to travel for different aims was the factual case .We should not regard holidays as a luxury because,it serves a variety of vital roles and we cannot ignore Tourism contribution on country economics ,any individual is in need of holiday to recharge his energy to produce more when he back to work.therefore taxing air traffic as a solution should be reassessed.
Since the growth of population and the changing needs;Air traffic become of a central importance to serve our requirements ,and rather than taxing,the governmental bodies and stakeholders have to look for better choices such as organizing the activities with building the airports far away from living compounds and strengthen the workplace safety measures for the employee and works with for example air buds and headphones and effective manipulations of the waste products.It is clear that it all related to better planning and management.
To sum up Air traffic nowadays is a constant part of our rapidly growing life that needs careful handling and management to reduce it drawbacks.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3 0.247107183377 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.164705882353 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852941176471 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441176470588 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0411764705882 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129411764706 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0529411764706 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98766310617 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382352941176 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00163938923432 179% => OK
Determiners: 0.0794117647059 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.021408717616 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00588235294118 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2030.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36363636364 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432601880878 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.33855799373 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225705329154 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166144200627 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98766310617 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652037617555 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 80.5687712525 60.7387585426 133% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0891783567 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 79.75 20.7743622355 384% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 302.723471175 49.517814964 611% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 507.5 127.492653851 398% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.75 20.7743622355 384% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.75 0.814263465372 461% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 113.605799373 49.1944974215 231% => OK
Elegance: 1.92941176471 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385437378032 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.275247030593 0.102741220458 268% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741848047631 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 6.25578903656e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264014309267 0.134430193775 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382171795148 0.0742795772207 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326633910836 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877683734635 0.0638462369009 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264014309267 0.228012699653 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382171795148 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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