Find some strange rules of the university in the world

Essay topics:

Find some strange rules of the university in the world

In France, Ketchup is illegal in school cafeterias. This is due to French teenagers using so much ketchup in their school lunches. The law was put into place by Christopher Hebert, the president of the national association of municipal catering managers.
I agree with that view of the school. There are two reasons for me to agree.
The first reason, in my opinion, is to protect the traditional values of the dharma. This helps to confirm the role of traditional food. At the same time, it is not to lose the value of traditional food in the hearts of the dharma.
The second reason, limiting Ketchup also contributes to protecting students' health. Because too much sugar in tomatoes can cause diabetes and obesity.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2021-12-20 hoakhanhminh 84 view
2021-10-31 nfseg 73 view
2021-08-28 Moin Uddin Ahammed 56 view
2021-08-28 Moin Uddin Ahammed 56 view
2021-08-28 Moin Uddin Ahammed 56 view
Essays by user nhatuzumakii :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... Ketchup also contributes to protecting students health. Because too much sugar in tomat...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86178861789 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66671623987 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8118189983 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.