The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts give information about the energy consumption and greenhouse gas release in average Australian home.
Overall, Australian families need the greatest amount of heating while water heating devices produce the highest amount of greenhouse gas. In contrast, the figures for cooling are always the lowest.
In terms of energy usage in an Australian family, heating appliances account for the highest portion. Particularly, 30% and 42% of energy is used for water heating and heating respectively. Refrigeration contributes 7% to total of energy consumption, which is almost a half of other appliances. The remaining parts including cooling and lighting only make up 2% and 4% respectively.
Regarding the greenhouse gas emissions, water heating ranks first with 32%, followed by other appliances with 28%. The heaters just make up only 15% the amount of greenhouse gas released. The use of refrigerators produces 14% of greenhouse gas, which is double the amount of energy for its operation. Finally, cooling and lighting still stand in the lowest group with 3% and 8% respectively.
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| 2020-11-09 | ThanhTHanh107 | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, regarding, still, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40935672515 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9971202393 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0818946253 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214683797755 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832284015964 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758814293775 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145698468475 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716150418498 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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