Critically evaluate whether the cause of delinquent behavior in teenagers is mainly genetic or environmental. Analyze the effects this behaviors has on society.
These day, juvenile delinquency is topical issue over the world. Some people argue that the main factors trigger this phenomenon whether nature or nurture. From my perspective, upbringing has more impact on teenager’s deviant behaviors and consequently numerous negative effects on society will arise.
There are two primary reasons why the environment affects on juvenile offences. To commence with, this is result of inappropriate guidance from parents. Nowadays, parents spend more time on their works than taking care of their offspring that contribute to lack of monitoring and advice on children’s manners. When parents have a propensity for criticizing their children violently or youngster face with the struggle in family regularly that may instill on their mind. Additionally, evil-minded peers are also the reasons as children are manipulated to engage in criminal activities such as shoplifting or pickpocketing. Because they interact with friends at school or outside, it is easy to follow their peers and tend to demonstrate themselves as others.
Unsurprisingly, several related serious problems on the whole society could be anticipated. First, committing a crime create insecure community that affects on citizen’s daily life. A number of offenders increase for instance robbery or violent attacks that the society will become more chaos, people will feel hopeless about the future and fear as they walk on the streets. Another issue is that this trend is attributed to the decline in economy. Teenager is part of workforce, but the deviant behaviors may dictate their job opportunities in the future. Besides, criminals also harm to the economy of victims and the budgets for organizing programs to curb the delinquent behavior of youngsters in society.
In conclusion, there are some reason regarding to environmental factor that lead to unlawful activities of juvenile and several issues have resulted from this tendency. Therefore, measures should be implemented by both government and individuals to mitigate these impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59294871795 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98639357715 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637820512821 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9687124965 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182805777379 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492412644997 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536060526153 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113569167675 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856449268477 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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