Some people say the development of technology is benefit for human life? Do you argee or disagree with this idea?
new Roman","serif"">some people are of the opinion that the developments of new technologies are intimately linked to globalization and enables society all over the world to approach all aspect of life. I firmly concur that this phenomenon are incredibly advantageous to both the countries and citizens.
new Roman","serif"">First and foremost, technology has put aside distances among people throughout the world.that is, everyone can freely connect around the globe. people easily build up a network. they can talk or chat with anyone who they want with the internet even if it is miles away without mailing delivery.. In this way, this allows you to make new friends, be communicative and also sometimes help you get rid of anxiety or depressions. For instance, while Covid 19 lockdowns have abruptly been disrupting the daily lives of people, the internet has played a crucial role in saving from their boredom. When almost every people are in need of connection with one another, a wide range of apps like Facebook, Instagram allow them to interact with their families, friends in different corners of the world to chat for free.
new Roman","serif"">moreover, technology makes distance learning more accessible than ever. With the wonders of internet, educators can take advantage of computers, laptops which allow students to perceive all aspect of knowledge by visiting educational websites. new Roman","serif"">Lectures and lessons can be uploaded to websites in written or video form, making information more accessible, which promotes universal access to education wherever you are. In this way, you don’t need to be stuck in a classroom. Instead, you can go study in your garden, on your living room or even on your own bed. In addition, you can choose an proper time to study whenever you’re at your productive best.
new Roman","serif"">Besides, all of the information you need is available. For example, if you need to know about sports, use Google search to understand it.
new Roman","serif"">Next, technology has had a huge impact on healthcare industry. In recent years, there has been many advancements in tools, which permit doctor to examine and identify health problems easily. moreover, equipment has been improved to make sure that patients are treated well and people feel comfortable. Then, advancement in medical technology has improved lifespans and improved the quality of life for people all over the world.
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new Roman","serif"">Noneless, there are some drawbacks. it has lots of false information, which can ruin someone’s reputation. Futhermore, it is crucial to verify the information before sharring it.
new Roman","serif""> In conclusion, I claim that the development in technology has a good impact on human life. Despie their drawbacks, it is good for people around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2625.0 1615.20841683 163% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91216216216 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.16201851355 2.80592935109 220% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0053437144 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.76 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140794903299 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547230562555 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412043349407 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843929489851 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528516574506 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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