Some people believe that youngsters should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old.what extent do you agree or disagree?
Certain individuals assert that minors ought to be compelled to have full time education until they are passed their senior secondary education.I tend to be agree with this statement because in this period of their life they get mandatory knowledge from schools to understand basics and prevent themselves to being unemployed.
Points behind the agreement of this view are very clear.. Primarily, if full time learning until 18 years old is necessary,then youngsters will not face any difficulty to understand their further education.To elaborate, while senior secondary schooling, student get elementary information about every subject and pursuing full time education really helps them to acquire brief knowledge. Secondly, soaring rate of unemployment enhance the importance of ful time education.To justify my opinion,in developing and under developed countries, younger generation have take the responsibility of their families or they are not able to pursue their studies due to lack of money.If they acquire full time education until at least 18 years old.They can get the jobs according to their qualification, this is better than to stay unemployed.
In spite of demerits, some students are not interested in schools Spending more time in school is like behind the bars for them.In context to it, youngsters who are interested in outdoor activities and not good at studies, when they are pressurized to stay at schools for full time.They become prone to aggression and depression rather than compelling themselves in sports field.
To conclude, I deemed that requiring full time education for younger generation have many positive points such as they can become self-sufficient even if they do not have higher education.Further , it really fruitful for those who want to pursue their masters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, at least, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48745519713 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01568814701 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.492683822 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.166666667 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318361324133 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147195486446 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695118249391 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184380648533 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394492318717 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.