Electronic transactions have become virtually inevitable part of almost every purchase since credit cards came to life. As a result, whether a cash-free society is realistic or not has become the epicenter of discussions in many social platforms. I am inclined to believe that a marketplace where nobody uses cash cannot be realised and the following paragraphs will elaborate on the advantages and the disadvantages of a cashless society.
On one hand, there are myriad of benefits of credit cards. Arguably, the most conspicuous one is that its convenience. As an example, credit card owners not only have the luxury to pay their bills or purchase a variety of services online with just the click of a button but also they just need to carry a light plastic card, not a bulky wallet. On the other hand, these conveniences are not without drawbacks. Some people, who rely on the credit their credit cards provide them, may face poverty if they cannot manage to pay their debts. For instance, data yielded by the University of Oxford in 2015 proves that those with low-income salary are suffering depression due to high credit card debts. Furthermore, there are some people who commit suicide when they cannot deal with the stress of the credit card bills.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the merits associated with cashless payments outweigh the downsides. However, a society which is completely cash-free is unrealistic considering people who are unbanked as well as under the poverty line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11155378486 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75616596924 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6775102075 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855685139813 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302564381174 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046720429666 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781057084226 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599278812032 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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