These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about the advancement of communication in the last decade. While is it possible to believe that people need the practice to adapt to new changes, my view is that pros outweigh cons. In this essay, I shall explain both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why people admire the evolvement of communication. One of them is that sharing of ideas and messages never been easier without the advancement of communication. It can also be argued that adapting to new technology will definitely save time. For an example, consider writing a letter to a loved one. It could take days to deliver the message by post, but it takes about a fraction of a second to deliver it through a text or over the internet.
Those who argue for communication evolvement have a different view and say that it actually can be a bad thing. Firstly, it is claimed that controlling what is being sent is relatively harder than it seems. Then, there are concerns about the proper use of communication channels by the young crowd.
While there are strong arguments to support both sides of the case, in my personal opinion I believe evolvement of communication in the last decade shaped up people’s lives. I would strongly recommend parents to adhere to a strict etiquette when allowing their children to use advanced communication methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...o support both sides of the case, in my personal opinion I believe evolvement of communication i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87252639272 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604255319149 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1380472797 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8461538462 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155979068366 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473388926483 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542135275786 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920269147594 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433709653272 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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