Nowadays, the young generation is enthusiastic about doing dangerous activities rather than other less risk-taking sports. Although doing sports is beneficial, such these sports might have some negative consequences. I completely against dangerous activities and I will discuss my point of views throughout this essay.
High risk-taking activities are not beneficial for health and it might affect the body functionality inversely. In fact, some type of sports needs much more exercise and preparation before doing them and without preparation, it would be harmful to body organs. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that sports such as bungee jumping needs a young body and a great preparation, in contrast, it might cause heart attack easily. Thus, it is considered that without exercise high-risking sports not only did not assist to have a healthier body but also it is hazardous.
Furthermore, some dangerous sports such as extreme skiing have been done only because of show off and renowned as luxury sports. Most of the people eager to do such these sport because they are expensive and make others to consider they are from a high-class family. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the most prevalent reason especially among youngsters which cause them to do this type of activities related to the fact that they believe they could find high impression on the other people and raise their class in the society.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments about supporting vigorous sports or rejected doing them, I profoundly believe that the drawback of dangerous sports far outweighs its benefits. Because these type of sports might be harmful to amateurs, also, it might have an unimportant and unnecessary reason for doing this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35099337748 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90052616936 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2133832573 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966011361316 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404871542995 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350200672402 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647024958413 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162114688805 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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