Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in the modern society.” Discuss the solutions to accept this fact.
Nowadays, euthanasia or assisted suciude has become a long-running dispute among public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " is euthanansia acceptable action or not in modern society?". It is a widely held a view that this is highly beneficial action in medical centre, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weight up the pros and cons of it.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I support euthanasia should be announced as a lligal action in hospitals. First and foremost is that, a large number of people who suffer from the chronic and irrecurable diseases for a long time should find a appropriate way to alleviate them from this terrible condition. In addition, numerous individuals are not able to pay the expensive bills that hospitals give them as a result of treating their families who are in the bed in sospitals. Therefore, there is little room doubt that governments are recomended to provide sick people a happy death.
On the other hand, needless to say that the main role of docters and nurses in medical center is to do their best to cure patients, so it is a immoral manner to help them assisted suciude. Furthermore, sickness is a part of one's life and help them to die is a behaviour like killing or murder. Thus, no one khows what the feature hold, so a patient who suffer in an irreversible coma maybe back to the life.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the importance of euthanasia should be considered. However, as every garden may have some weed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75563909774 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80040871895 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6863634325 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116982653658 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345231205998 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545396439903 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637313374825 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608397596983 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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