Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them, do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays, it has become a colossal trend to see that many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. There are myraids of reasons in favors of the topic. However, may people's are think that with families moving in different countries it is help to growing in money department. In this essay, I shall further elaborate both the sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are deluge of arguments which favor of my view point. Moreover, If all family members go with their parents than it is great help for them. In other country their are schooling, medical and other help given by free from government so it is big help for their parents too. In other era, parents can work and child care is also available their so it is easy to manage all things. In out side of India all family memmber can work so they can save money extra. Furthermore, family members need support from their parents so live with them it is possible.
On the flip side, critics argue that by not following standard policy but we can follow their countries rules for advantages. Furthermore, to reach at the signified level we can go through with some problems and though this we can get some proper result and idea for this. So parents should take there family with them in other country so they can also get chance to live in different atmospherics and culture. Also their child and other family member get some helpful knowledge from there.
To recapitulate, from the above mentioned arguments one can conclude that parents have to taking their families with them in other country because it is so helpful and grateful experience for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76369863014 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38756110294 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3134535269 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30955882113 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122416137547 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121407474461 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224431111427 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682115460608 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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