Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion?
It is irrefutable to say that,TV play pivotal role in every body life all around the world.I am inclined that TV is the most important mass media in people's life.In this essay I will illustrate some advantages and disadvantageous of TV.
On the one hand,there are several reason way TV has most influance on people life.first and foremost is that,Tv is the cheapest and reaceable media for people globally.fore exampel, in the furrest rular areas in Tabat or Africa you can see a TV set in people's home.As a result,govrnments an broadcast organizastion can shair their ideas and programmes for them.in addition,producers by advertising their products in TV are able to sell their goods more easily,so the more sell products by componies,the more job opportunities we have all around the world.Furthermore,Tv progrommal is a free educational system which governments can rise public awarnesses about global issues.hence,people are more interested to use TV in their daily lives.
On the other hand.many people argued that watching TV is wasting time.fore example,a group of social reserchers of Harvard University conducted a survey on two different groups who spent three hours a day watching Tv channel and a group who never see TV.The result reveaied that the first group were four times more likely fail in their lesson at university.The relation sheep between two groups wae statistically significant.Hence,watvhing TV cause distruct student at studing their lessons.
In a nutshell,although there are many benefies to watching Tv,in my points of view I beilive that people should spend thier times to studing book rather then wastinh their time to see TV channel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56232317718 2.71678728327 131% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.5024630542 322% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.7149972 50.4703680194 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.5 104.977214359 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 20.9669160288 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.25397266985 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141423892461 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883683330562 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334139879724 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883683330562 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334139879724 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 12.6369458128 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 53.1260098522 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.9458128079 265% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.3980295567 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.5123152709 276% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.