Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Many experiments are beeing carried out from many centuries by all the government of developed and developing countries. Some feel that these discoveries are good for the human beings, while other feel it worthless as for them, problems on the earth are far more important than the wastage on space explorations. In following paragraphs, I would discuss both views and in conclude with my point of view.
There are some grounds for the belief that space exploration can benefit the human civilization in many ways. Firstly, different planets can be searched for the new civilization which can be much more advanced than us and can guide us for the solving our problems. Secondly, as the global population is increasing day by day, there is a need for extra land where excess people can be habilitated.
However, opponents of this idea feel there are many problems to be addressed by us on the earth like climate change, drought, greenhouse effects, flood, etcetera. We need to first solve these problems on our planet before going to the another planet. Apart from this, the amount of money and resources spent on space exploration if spent on these dilemmas can create a huge difference to underdeveloped nations.
To sum it all, although space exploration is beneficial for the human community, it is quite essential for us to spend judiciously on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01321585903 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81017908392 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7932382748 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172733873507 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713083812141 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074273185765 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105785206503 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252863001112 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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