In recent years, there has been a monumental shift in the thinking of society concerning a women's role. While most people believe that empowering women is extremely beneficial for the advancement of modern human civilization, others oppose this idea. This essay will discuss both sides and provide reasons why they should be treated at par with men and be given equal opportunities to succeed.
To begin with, one strong argument among those that consider women to lead a life bound to their homes is that while they are responsible for taking care of the children and household chores, the men earn a livelihood. In a world where couples prefer staying separately from parents, the females inadvertently become responsible for managing the family. For example, in rural India, every girl child is taught cooking, so that they can cook for the family of her husband once married.
However, there are several arguments in favour of promoting women to excel in a career path of their choice. No research establishes the women are inferior to men in working for companies. On the contrary, many firms are hiring women as they consider them to be more loyal. For instance, a leading survey suggests that in 2019, one-third of all the CEO's were women. Moreover, there are many instances where single mothers are pursuing challenging careers, yet find adequate time to take care of their children. Furthermore, there are an increasing number of house-husbands nowadays.
To conclude, despite some traces of patriarchal views, the world is increasingly empowering women to lead a successful career path while taking additional responsibility of taking care of their families. In my opinion, women are as capable as men in every domain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14134275618 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78894187034 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3753056998 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251706552106 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748057119041 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453781224222 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145061735227 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599831094081 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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