Nowadays studying overseas is quite popular among students; however many people suggest that going foreign country for studies is overrated because there are several examples of many scholars who studied in their native country and did amazingly well in their respective field of study. I agree with this notion and despite few advantages of studying in other country, I believe that students must opt for local universities because it will help universities as well as country.
To begin with, there are many reasons why students want to study in foreign universities but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it provides an opportunity to understand and experience different cultures. To cite an example, when students from middle east join an University in European country then feel a lot of freedom in those countries which is not the case in their native country. Therefore, freedom, learning other tradition attract many students.
On the other hand, many think that students should join local universities because it will stop the brain drain which will help the country. Foreign universities always look for very talented students from several parts of the World because it helps them in research and development of new technology. By encouraging students to join local colleges, authorities can utilize the human capital of country. For example, Styam nadela, Sundar pichai and many more have studied in India and serving in USA based MNCs; therefore government must encourage students to study in their local universities.
In conclusion, despite several benefits being offered by overseas studies, It is right for students to go in native colleges because this will help society and nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...le, when students from middle east join an University in European country then fee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31501831502 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67120131289 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.553105911 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201366230402 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819339625369 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761991291969 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124952449813 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073651944789 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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