Since the invention of the movie, watching films have become a virtually inevitable part of modern life. Some people argue films should be embedded in the curriculum as they are as vital as studying literature; opponents claim films are just wastage of time. Despite literature being key to improving reading comprehension, I am profoundly inclined to believe that studying drama at school is as prominent as literature; thus, it can be utilized as a powerful education tool. Whether film-based instructions are as important as literature will be further elaborated on in the following paragraphs.
First of all, films provide not only children but also adults with a myriad of benefits, and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people can build stronger emotional connections with what they watch. As a result, they can relate to themselves better which stimulates student learning without boredom. However, this may not always the case with literature because some students actually hate studying literature. For instance, the data yielded by a reputable high school in the UK in 2017 proves that students obtained higher exam grades when they learned literature syllabus through dramas than when they learned through conventional means.
Second of all, another key value of film in education is that it is a leveller and it has a universal language. For example, students can discuss their opinions about a drama even if they have learning disabilities, which will ultimately promote the development of their social skills. Furthermore, reading literature can be challenging which might hinder the learning process.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that films are as much prominent as literature in a school curriculum. It is expected that executive head teachers will take cognizance of this fact and include studying films at school as an option for pupils just like music and art.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32679738562 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86783652056 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8878230873 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29150181968 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100557432698 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07565153038 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178544708996 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100848762868 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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