technology and new inventions is it beneficial or detrimental to the society?
The enduring dissension in the public psyche is inventions. Besides, it has to assay whether inventions are a constructive or averse brunt on society. Divergences with the populace are inventions are improving the society whilst others retaliate that inventions generate problems. In this essay, I shall advocate my outlook by scrutinising both sides of the argument.
To embark with computer inventions fulsome, initially, Overuse of the computer leads to poor eyesight is well deliberate eminent a hindrance in society. Further, children are too much addicted to computer games that spoil their academic. Thus, the discrepancy measures connote that the people once practised in computer shunning the manual work. Hence, above precede effectuate despondent in this society.
The aforementioned has an awful conjecture desperate topic. The people who outright to contend with computer inventions have wide-ranging forth will enunciate to enhance. Acclaimed that the computer saves human time and effort. A notable computer connects to the internet and supports communication. For instance, voice chat, video chat, E-mail, etc. In ancillary, data saved in the computer will avoid doing repetitive work. So, vital around the recompense aloft uncovered will converse and construe diverse eminent effectuate people here too sanguine.
Overall, aforesaid concludes an apex with assorted uncompromising moot which refutes the hostile in inventions. hence, the decisive entail Government must take proper steps to cut its negative effects, Prominent in wrangle upsurge detriment with no partiality will precise my prospect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, look, so, thus, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89931798374 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680672268908 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.976413209 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948862751321 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255441506683 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504022698373 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593057881206 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528964273354 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 53.1260098522 60% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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