television is an essential part of our lives?
The importance of today, television is an essential part of our lives as a medium of spread news and awareness, and for some, it even acts as a companion, which was debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of television is an essential part of our lives has sparked the controversy over the potential effect of this trend on in recent years. It can be agreed that it has a great impact but it has some drawbacks. This essay will elaborate on how television is an essential part of our lives, and thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
at the outset, there are numerous reasons why people use television more for as a medium to spread news and awareness about life. which include the news, cartoon, knowledge, and serials for entertainment in our life. As an example, if old age people are watch television then is ok for them because they get some freshness from that device but if child is watch TV for so many time that parents should take action for that.
However, it has some disadvantages and some people tend to believe that in recernt generation television is main source for entertainment and some other things so people always watch for that. hence is not always worth but for that we can buy a numberic spacks for that.
In conclusion, the effect of nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives is prominent.however it has some demerits that should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.736 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84651646754 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7730850963 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403707333533 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190557122391 0.0925447433944 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190304716246 0.071462118173 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293715336597 0.151781067708 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230710060309 0.0609392437508 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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