Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society has been the epicenter of discussion and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of violence portrayed on TV through multiple modes of communications be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that why I am not agree with the statement and will give some examples.
The most prominent reason is that people watch TV or movies to entertain themselves. Moreover, we can watch many types of programs like comedy, reality, cooking and many more. In addition, nowadays most of the movies we watch are mainly based on super heroes such as Spiderman, ironman, superman and so on. Furthermore, we do not follow them on our daily lives; we watch the movies just to entertain us not to be like them.
Continuing to this, those type of movies contains bad guys and good guys so we can teach our children not be like a bad guys as at the end of the story the bad guys rather dies or goes into the jails. Moreover, children can also thing that if we behave like a superhero than nobody can defeat us and they will be confident to do all their tasks.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the fact of violence portrayed. I would like to conclude that these types of movies cannot increase more crime in the society as people watch the movies to entertain not to follow in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...will try to enunciate that why I am not agree with the statement and will give some e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51933112571 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0987718181 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.909090909 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327917923986 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127702686449 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935289811686 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195300859913 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774713715739 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.1260098522 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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