Nowadays some people argue about the negative effects of technology developments Is technology good or it has also bad impacts? How it affects our life, and communication between people. Some people think that technology kills the warm relationship between people. Computers, mobile phones and television are the most discussed topics. I definitely agree with televisions bad effects on human relations. I shall explain my reasons in the following lines.
When I was a little girl I remember myself when I was playing some games with my friends from our neighborhood. We used to go to parks, garden...
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