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do you agree or disagree with:your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does
There are many distinctive definitions of happiness; some people believe that working could lead them to feel pleasant because they love the feel of concentration and success in the working process. But some people hold the view that their social life can have more positive effects on their life than working can have, and they often focus on conveying their emotions and perspective and sharing life with close people. In my opinion, I would to disagree the statement that job has more effect on my happiness than my social life does and I think social life could bring me with more surprises.
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Sentence: In my opinion, I would to disagree the statement that job has more effect on my happiness than my social life does and I think social life could bring me with more surprises.
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No. of Words: 518 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 518 350
No. of Characters: 2420 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.771 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.672 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.48 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.247 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.576 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.285 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5