The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Behind every success person who attempted more than one to reach his or her goal, that the mean of “Never, never give up “. If you believe in these four words, you can turn the impossible to possible. In my consideration, this statement is efficient in change the life of any person includes me.
First of all, not from first try all what you want become in your hand. You may fail more than one time to learn how to stand, just like a baby. I have a lot of dream that I wish to become true, but words is nothing without action. One of my dreams is accepted in the most known university in the United State, and to admit to these colleges I must get a high score in the toefl exam. At the beginning, it seems so hard with respect to me to achieve ninety marks and above, because I am so bad in English especially in writing and speaking section. I wrote many essay about different subject but my evaluated was low than the requirement. My dream will not break just because this exam, I will try over and over to reach my target, just because I believe on me.
Second, sometimes the negative attitude can kill any ambitious. The person who has a will and insistence can reach to the moon and who give up just from first try can lose many. Sometimes after long waiting and little patient can damage the wall of the despair, may behind this wall a heaven. For instance, my friend graduated from civil engineering department before one year and he didn't find a job, but after his long patient a famous company called him to work with them with great salary.
Finally, surrender is just the character of the people whom don’t believe in their self and ability. If they lost their confidence, they will lose everything. Give up mean that they don’t work hard to attain to their target. For instance, how the player wants to be talent and famous from first time, it’s impossible to reach his target just from one trying.
To sum up, if you believe that you can fly then you will, don’t let the door of the despair breaks your dream. Sometimes God close one door to open other, just keep patient and don’t give up.
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that the mean of “Never, never give up “.
that is the meaning of “Never, never give up “.
but words is nothing without action.
but words are nothing without action.
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