Human beings, by nature, tend to live in a group. Even some psychologists calls human "the social animal". Given that, since the people around us greatly affect us, it is crucial to choose which people we are mostly in touch with. The first candidate groupe that naturally crosses our minds are extended family members. Although they are very kind and caring towards us, in the modern era, they play a less important role in our lives. In the following paragraphs, I provide three points that clarifies how new structure of the society and cities have contributed to this phonomenon.
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Sentence: The first candidate groupe that naturally crosses our minds are extended family members.
Error: groupe Suggestion: group
Sentence: In the following paragraphs, I provide three points that clarifies how new structure of the society and cities have contributed to this phonomenon.
Error: phonomenon Suggestion: phenomenon
Sentence: In a word, owing to the points and causes mentioned in the previous paragraphs, it appears loggical to safely draw the conclusion that extended family mebers play a less significant role in our lives because not only the architecture of the cities has changed, but also there are several substitutions for family members.
Error: loggical Suggestion: logical
Error: mebers Suggestion: members
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