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Integrated essay. Electoral college syatem.KAPLAN'S
The summary of the lecture can be understood as the three points those are considered to be the flaws of the electoral college system by the lecturer. He terms the system as the complex process of electing the president of the United States, which takes place once in every 4 years, because he is skeptical about the role of will of the people involved in this process.
The lecturer agrees with the passage to some extent regarding the population of smaller and larger states affecting the votes. However the professor states that this kind of system affects the final outcome depending solely u...
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Sentence: The favor for one candidate affect the election system of direct popula votes.
Description: The fragment candidate affect the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace affect with verb, past tense
Sentence: The favor for one candidate affect the election system of direct popula votes.
Error: popula Suggestion: popular
Sentence: Therefore, it is a storng massage about respecting the people's voice.
Error: storng Suggestion: strong
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 218 250
No. of Characters: 1042 1200
No. of Different Words: 122 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.843 4.3
Average Word Length: 4.78 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.436 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.379 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.402 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.7 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4