Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living analyze each viewpoint and take a stand give specific reasons

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Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living.analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. give specific reasons

Money is everything nowadays. People run behind world to earn money. Some people think it is necessary to make large money while others think to earn money for comfortable living. In my view, money for comfortable living is enough. I have my points to hold this opinion.

First reason is satisfaction is very important in life. Ultimate goal in our life is satisfy ourselves. If we earn large money also there is nothing without satisfaction. So first we should be satisfied with what we have. For example, my grandfather earned a lot of money. But now in his old age also he never satisfied with what he had. He wants to earn money now also. Anytime if i go to his room he is always like thinking about something and his dissatisfaction reflects in his face.

Second reason is it is hard to save large amount of money. We never know how the money will go. We always have tension in our minds about money thinking whether money theft by someone or someone has killed us for money. Like these more money gives more tensions. For example, my grandfather's friend is a rich man. He saved all his money in home. One day a thief came to his home and theft all his money. When he saw that he was shocked, got heart attack and dead at the spot.

Third reason is if one generation make large amount of money, the next generation in that family is becoming lazy in doing work. He is thinking that he had so much money so why to work hard? Moreover, they are getting bad ideas like taking drugs and all. So it spoils good life of youth.

Our aim to earn money is to be comfortable like having own home, own car and all facilities in home and to educate their children. That's it. If he or she satisfy all these things that's enough. No need to earn more money and to get more complications in their life and their children life.

Final conclusion is that making money for comfortable living is more satisfactory than making large amounts of money.

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Sentence: Ultimate goal in our life is satisfy ourselves.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and satisfy

Sentence: If he or she satisfy all these things that's enough.
Description: The fragment she satisfy all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace satisfy with verb, past tense

Sentence: No need to earn more money and to get more complications in their life and their children life.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and life

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