people attend colledge or university for different reasons
Now days, many people attend to educate from university or college for various reason. Needs to say, a university degree often person achieve his goal easier. However, do we attend university just in pursuit of degree? Does university only provide us nothing beneficial beside a paper-made diploma? As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university educate in following aspects:
First, educated people have good job and could occupied better position. In addition, they can earn more money and high respect in society, compensation for, the money years of study and grueling hours. For example, we can’t see, person who educated in astronomy works in vender. Undoubtly, he/she work in laboratory to make research.
By educating from university, students can achieved skill and experience that is related to future career. Also, they can learn how to solve problem in their life and job without disturbing.
Furthermore, educated people can help others easily if putting what they learn in a university into use. So, without education it is difficult to give a hand to who are in need.
In conclusion, university education corrects our values, enhance our skills, and broad our horizons. So we can get a better understanding of society, find a decent job in a easy way and help others easier. All of these are due to the knowledge learned in a university.
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Sentence: Now days, many people attend to educate from university or college for various reason.
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Sentence: Needs to say, a university degree often person achieve his goal easier.
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Sentence: As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university educate in following aspects:
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Sentence: First, educated people have good job and could occupied better position.
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Sentence: By educating from university, students can achieved skill and experience that is related to future career.
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Sentence: So, without education it is difficult to give a hand to who are in need.
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Sentence: In addition, they can earn more money and high respect in society, compensation for, the money years of study and grueling hours.
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