Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society. Other the people think that the contributions of artists are the most important. Which position do you agree with? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Generally speaking, each of the domain, science and art, has a great contribution to development of the world and society. I really believe that these two areas have a great influence one on each other, and both of them have their own important role for human life. If I have to choose, I would say that scientist make the most important contribution to society.
First, the science contributes to the evolution of the society increasing the quality of life. For example, few centuries ago, the average duration of life for people was about forty - fifty years because of numerous diseases without ...
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