Land is one of the precious natural resources of our country and it is our duty to protect it from dangers and by building more and more houses, industries. Now a days, population growth is increasing drastically which leads to build more houses, create jobs for people by introducing industries, factories, multinational companies. In my view, land should be kept in its natural condition and allow future generation to enjoy. Here are some reasons and examples.
First of all, people need land to do agriculture, in this growing population demand for food is also increased. Most of the agricultu...
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While writing in middle i
While writing in middle i felt i was going out of the topic. I hope i have managed to stay within the topic.
Please let me know what else i can improve on.
Thank you,
Anju
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Look at this:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35
It means your ideas are not focus on something. It is easily out of topic if you don't control it well.
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reason 1: save time
reason 2: same money
reason 3: get more info
reason 4: make friends
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 2013 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.083 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.771 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.952 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5