In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Land is one of the precious natural resources of our country and it is our duty to protect it from dangers and by building more and more houses, industries. Now a days, population growth is increasing drastically which leads to build more houses, create jobs for people by introducing industries, factories, multinational companies. In my view, land should be kept in its natural condition and allow future generation to enjoy. Here are some reasons and examples.

First of all, people need land to do agriculture, in this growing population demand for food is also increased. Most of the agricultu...

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While writing in middle i felt i was going out of the topic. I hope i have managed to stay within the topic.
Please let me know what else i can improve on.

Thank you,
Anju

Look at this:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35

It means your ideas are not focus on something. It is easily out of topic if you don't control it well.

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