TPO 03 - Question 2

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TPO 03 - Question 2

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Hi.
How to improve it. There is fluency and content, I do not overused "because, in case, as a result, ehm" and there is no obvious pauses in speach. I try to recored an aswer which will be scored 28 but it got only 24. What is wrong with it?
Thank you.

Because the reasons are somehow big and possibly create duplicated content. And it is hard to deliver a good argument in 45 seconds with those reasons. We are expecting some reasons simpler, like:

first, group study can save time. why this reason...advantages of saving time.

second, it can improve social skills. why..advantages...