TPO 06 - Question 2 Some people have one career throughout their lives. Other people do different kinds of work at different points in their lives. Which do you think is better? Explain why.

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In the second reason, need to argue why one career will make more money. the pattern is:

reason + why reason + advantages of reason

we may say in the second reason, like:

second, one career will make more money. //reason

1. business owners are likely to hire and pay more to those who are professionals 2. people with different jobs will waste time and energy on different resumes, training... //why reason

with more money, i can put the money for my kids' education.//advantages of reason

when there is no time left, 'advantages of reason' can be removed, but 'why reason' is always necessary.
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or we can use another pattern which is:
reason + example

second, one career will make more money. //reason
for example, I am a doctor working at a clinic, while i can make $10,000 monthly, with extra bonus and holidays, but my friend is working as a nurse, pizza maker, computer trainer...seasonally. He is much busier than me, but earn much less than me. //example