governement officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Government decisions making process is an important pillar on which country’s development and economy depends upon. These decisions are really crucial for people’s overall welfare. The prompt argues that government should make decisions without inclusion of public view or will. In my opinion, I mostly agree that public opinion shouldn’t be taken into account while making this crucial for 2 following reasons, though I concede that this can turn to riot or marches by public if opinions of both group is contrasting.
Firstly, not all people know the effect that a decision can have on their country, hence they could easily make decisions that are not optimal. For example, public could demand tax decrease for individual personnel gain, even though government is running balance deficit which could cause their country to go in debt. This debt could unfortunately increase until there is no return. Public needs to know the effect of tax decrease before they decide based on their personnel gain for which they need knowledge of economics. That is why letting government make decision is a wise since they hire and include economist in decision process.
Secondly, human being sometimes tend to make decision based on their emotions and this could produce bias in decision making process. For example- if a international country stops a beneficial trade( for eg-oil) with their country, the public might get uproar and this anger can cause public to decide to not trade at all with that international country to get their revenge. However, this will just further ruin the relationship with that particular country and will lose the benefit we gained from other trades. So basically this decision made with anger would only cause negative effect on a country. In government make this kind of decision based views of various qualified people and trained to reduce as much damage to the welfare of the country.
On the other hand, not listening to public can also cause uproar which could cause riot and marches in order to overturn the government decision. These riots can really violent as public fear that their democracy might be turning into dictatorship.
In conclusion, not listening to will of public could cause uproar but the benefit outweighs the con.
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- Governement officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 70
- governement officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 50
- governement officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... of public view or will. In my opinion, I mostly agree that public opinion should...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...crucial for 2 following reasons, though I concede that this can turn to riot or m...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cision process. Secondly, human being sometimes tend to make decision based on...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ecision making process. For example- if a international country stops a beneficia...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g into dictatorship. In conclusion, not listening to will of public could cause ...
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: MODAL_OF[2]
Message: It's never correct to use "of" after a modal verb. Use 'will have'.
Suggestion: will have
...ship. In conclusion, not listening to will of public could cause uproar but the benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 370.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15135135135 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53876303545 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5977059564 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.70786347227 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115730885992 0.218282227539 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479497288335 0.0743258471296 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337763309578 0.0701772020484 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683437731897 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267511702183 0.0628817314937 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.3799401198 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.