Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?
In the industrialization era, fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Instead, the young move to metropolis cities to live and find jobs. There are various reasons for this trend. However, in my view, young people should be encouraged to do farming work. This essay will discuss the reasons for this action.
Firstly, the main reason mentioned for this situation is the advantage of technology. The development of technology has replaced humans in almost all areas including agriculture. Robots and machines are invested to increase productivity and reduce laborers. Besides, high income and less workload in urban areas are factors that attract the young. Doing farming would be quietly hard for modern young people because of weather impact or physical health while the income might be not enough for their standard of living.
However, I would argue that more young people are needed to do farming nowadays. The first reason that I would mention is the characteristics of the young that are suitable for modern agriculture. Younger generations who are tech-savvy, tend to be more adaptable to new technologies and innovations. In modern agriculture, where technology plays a significant role in improving efficiency and sustainability, young farmers are more likely to effectively utilize these advancements. Moreover, young farmers often have access to better education about sustainable and eco-friendly farming practices. They are more likely to understand the importance of environmentally friendly approaches and are willing to implement, that are not only beneficial for the long-term development of farming but also make life better for everyone.
All in all, technology and income are the factors causing this situation and young people should be fostered to join in producing food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...modern agriculture. Younger generations who are tech-savvy, tend to be more adaptable t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0016916999 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5790364119 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424783476504 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144492514222 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190589394665 0.0667982634062 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266377578016 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135379675852 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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