The problem of releasing lawbreakers from prison has been always debatable issue and has know become more contrasensial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion The Substantial influence of this trend sparked the controversy over the potential effect in the recent years. This essay will discuss the problem of this trend and measures to tackle this problem and this will be lead to a logical conclusione.
There are myriad of reasons but the most potential one is, mostly people in carcerated because of unemployment they commit crimes to filfull their dreams when they are released from prison they again do same things which increased the Crimes rate. Moreover, there are many big lawbreakers in prisons and some small offenders influence from them and they are connected with bad companionship. For example, a survey was Conducted by the Indian government in 2019 in which they found that 60 % crminals commit felon after releasing from prisons because of this reasons. This evidence proves that why most of offenders do same things after exonerate from carcerated.
Sleps the to address this problem are many but the most practical and accessible once are not complicated. Besides this, government should provide some particular activities which helps to concentration on others platform and learn some moral values which may reduce the crime rate and also lawmakers provide some job opportunity. For instance, UK government provide some jobs to lawbreakers after releasing from prison. So, now in UK crime rate is very low from others nations.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are a variety of driving forces for this issue and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
- Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem 61
- Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem 56
- Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...has been always debatable issue and has know become more contrasensial with many peo...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...after releasing from prisons because of this reasons. This evidence proves that why ...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the offenders') or simply say ''most offenders''.
Suggestion: most of the offenders; most offenders
... reasons. This evidence proves that why most of offenders do same things after exonerate from car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17081850534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65751456871 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9000221066 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.090909091 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311244689359 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124975694215 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618906862552 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192130632829 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528518983738 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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