The rise of online shopping has resulted in the decline of traditional retail stores Do you think this is a positive or negative development

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The rise of online shopping has resulted in the decline of traditional retail stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, the growth of online shopping has had a lot of impact on traditional retail stores. I believe that this is positive development for society. This essay will discuss about positive development of the online shopping growth
First, Online shopping has some strength points especially convenience, people can shop the goods at every time and every where without move out thier home, this is useful for people who don't have time to visit stores. For example, in covid 19 epidemic diseases, when people cann't go outside to buy things they need, online shopping rapid grow up and become one of the most typical shopping. Even in daily, customers are too busy due to work for life so they don't have time to shop. That how online shopping develop in nowadays.
Second, Online shopping has more products than ordinary stores and also cheaper than them so it's many customers. It has widen range of goods so customers have a selection of its. Beside that, there are no cost for building a store or hiring employees.
In conclusion, Online shopping are in favor of people around the world depend on its benefits.​

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...of impact on traditional retail stores. I believe that this is positive developme...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...le can shop the goods at every time and every where without move out thier home, this is us...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...than them so its many customers. It has widen range of goods so customers have a sele...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are no costs'?
Suggestion: there are no costs
...s have a selection of its. Beside that, there are no cost for building a store or hiring employee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41951610032 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5673808379 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260971459342 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111327093335 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748687993282 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162980309977 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10197324182 0.056905535591 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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