You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The debated topic whether many countries having the same shops and products creates a positive development or negative one is still controversial. This essay will delve the pros and cons of the issues and state my opinion later.
On the one hand, the advantages of encouraging the same stores and products are boosting the nation's economy and expanding its culture as well. When a company produce a major items, their labour force, machine and facilities are specialized. this results in successfully creating its high-quality outcomes which gains much profits for the company. As it is generally known that the more the company develops, the better the country's economy is. Moreover, most of the shops selling the products they make are the handicraft ones. This is a form of advertising the culture of that nation to over the world with the cheapest and most benificial ways. By doing that, the country will attract more tourists visting to. It not only provide job opportunities to the local people but also raise their living standard.
On the other hand, having the same shops and products also has some detrimal impacts. IIf the shops just pay ttention to develop the same products, there will be no consumption need. the owners of those shops quickly get in debt. In a worse situation, they will go bankrupt. If more and more companies face this situations, the economy will be severely affected. Moreover, nowadays at the busy space of life, people tend to choose a supermarket with a wide variety of products to save their time, to enjoy the competitive price and just to relax.
In conclusion, from above discussion, I am of the opinion that, countries should encourages shops with more diverse items to attract more customers and gain higher profits to develop and broaden its reputation all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...machine and facilities are specialized. this results in successfully creating its hi...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9737704918 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62607191357 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7965260616 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17024816838 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531551570231 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059586926487 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115885029189 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514755896458 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.