Fast food
Fast food can be convenient and affordable, but it often lacks nutritional balance, being high in calories, fats, sugars, and salt. While it's fine as an occasional treat, regularly consuming fast food can lead to health problems like obesity, heart disease, and diabetes. It’s important to consider moderation and balance, incorporating healthier choices alongside fast food to maintain overall well-being. Fast food offers several benefits, especially in terms of convenience. It’s quick and easy, making it a good option for people with busy schedules. It’s also often affordable, providing a relatively inexpensive way to get a meal. Many fast food restaurants offer a wide variety of options, which can appeal to different tastes and preferences. Additionally, some chains have started offering healthier options, like salads or grilled items, to cater to those looking for more balanced meals. When it comes to fast food, moderation is key. While it's fine to indulge occasionally, try not to make it a regular part of your diet. Opt for healthier choices when possible, such as salads, grilled items, or meals with vegetables and lean proteins. Pay attention to portion sizes to avoid overeating, and be mindful of high levels of salt, sugar, and unhealthy fats. Consider pairing fast food with healthier snacks, like fruits or nuts, to balance out your meal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31797235023 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80639485993 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3326160931 49.2860985944 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7692307692 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06452816374 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407604910593 0.272083759551 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165175794067 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161923212745 0.0662205650399 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407604910593 0.162205337803 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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