Special holiday

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Special holiday

The special holiday in Vietnamese is a Tet holiday . Tet, also known as the Lunar New Year, is the most significant and meaningful festival in Vietnamese culture. It's a time for family reunions, honoring ancestors, and welcoming a new year filled with hope and prosperity. Preparations for Tet begin weeks in advance, with people cleaning their homes, shopping for food, and decorating with peach blossoms and kumquat trees. Traditional foods like banh chung (square sticky rice cake), banh tet (cylindrical sticky rice cake), pickled onions, and various sweets are essential for the celebrations.

New Year's Eve is a sacred moment when families gather to welcome the new year together. Fireworks light up the sky, adding to the festive atmosphere. On the first day of Tet, people visit temples to pray for peace and good fortune, and they spend time visiting relatives and friends, exchanging best wishes. Children eagerly anticipate receiving "li xi," red envelopes filled with money, symbolizing luck and blessings.

Tet is not only a time for enjoyment but also a period for strengthening family bonds, sharing joy, and renewing hopes for the future. Despite the busyness of life, Tet provides an opportunity for everyone to pause, reflect, and appreciate the traditional values, family ties, and affection that define Vietnamese culture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l holiday in Vietnamese is a Tet holiday . Tet, also known as the Lunar New Year, ...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: IT_IS[11]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ningful festival in Vietnamese culture. Its a time for family reunions, honoring an...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eagerly anticipate receiving 'li xi,' red envelopes filled with money, ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38679245283 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75497662143 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2671201638 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786228977376 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644593521442 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203838369274 0.0667982634062 305% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046211339451 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065352702987 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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