It is widely believed that consumerism is vital for the economic well-being of a country. However others feel that consumerism has unacceptable social consequences on a society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In some people opinion, consumerism plays a critical role in economic development. On the other hand, critics believe it has unbearable outcomes on the society. Despite the importance of high consuming system on the market, I think its side-effects would be more harmful than its privileges.
Consumerism can have several positives impacts on business. Firstly, it leads to more productions which mean creating more working opportunities for job seekers. Secondly, market demands force companies to bring innovation to their manufacturing. For example, consumers can access cutting-edge technologies very quickly. Finally, consumers get benefits of high competition among different factories. For instance, the buyers will have various options for their required items with different quality and price ranges.
In spite of advantages of higher consumptions, it has some serious drawbacks. First of all, many companies downgrade their products' quality in order to keep their competitive market, which means consumers cannot use their purchased items in long-term, and eventually the end-users suffer financially. In addition, consumerisms have been devastated to the ecosystem, and it causes pollution and wasting resources. Lastly, too much consumption has had negative cultural effects on our lives as well. As an example, people instead of repairing their belongings, they prefer to replace it, that it turns into a disaster when people use the same pattern in their relationships.
In conclusion, consumerism brings some benefits economically, and it causes financial growth in some countries. However, it brings long-term damages to the society including environmental contamination and cultural degradation. I believe that disadvantages of having high consumption consumers are more than its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90494296578 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17774741272 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3892824374 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7058823529 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112364361009 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395735570083 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439794673243 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750229204313 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447204866241 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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