Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write:
.who your and why you write this letter
.explain the problems
. give your suggestions on how to solve the problems
Dear Mr Smith
I am living in a house just opposite to yours. I am writing this epistle to you as the society and me are facing some issues from your dog as you keep it in your park.
As you are not tying your pet and it roams freely in your garden. So, when children go out to play, your dog barks at them and toddlers get afraid from Bruno and stopped going out in the street to play outdoor games hence it will effect their health. Not only this but also two days back, my son was coming from school in the afternoon and Bruno tried to bite my son but luckily my son was able to escape. That is why, it is not good to leave it freely. Moreover, yesterday, social club members visited your home to invite you on the function arranged in the society. But, your pet was roaming in the park, so they were not able to enter your house.
I request you to keep your dog inside the house. But, if this is not possible then atleast, you shuld tie it in the garden rather than to set it free.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Flora Farnandes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...eet to play outdoor games hence it will effect their health. Not only this but also tw...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
... it in the garden rather than to set it free. I look forward to hearing from you....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16346153846 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93563209253 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2745430375 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324180567096 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133039939103 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124080534931 0.0603063233224 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174035504742 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922131391093 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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