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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s drawn lots of attention during a long period of time due to the impacts it has on peoples li...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...it has on peoples lives. Depending on a persons personality, experiences and even emoti...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... if a worker does the same job, he gets bored of what he does resulting in lack of effic...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...works as a driver for the same company. While the other one do the same office job al...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ne do the same office job all day long. if you were in their shoes, indeed, you wo...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ume is all the thing that is matter. So these kind of workers can take advantage of their ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, by and large, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61261261261 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43591075961 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7715670757 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.304347826 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1304347826 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293311216723 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916111815248 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817576007195 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183904390586 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298730855605 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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