You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You feel that the streets around your neighbourhood are too dirty and have too
much rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should:
• say who you are
• explain the problem and its effects on your life
• give suggestions on how to solve the problem
Dear Sir
I am one of the residents of Friend's colony. I am writing this missive to tell you about the condition of streets of the area. The streets are very dirty and there is a waste all around on them.
The situation of nearby roads is getting worse day by day. Sweeper is not coming to clean the streets and there is a garbage collected on the streets. Beside that, it is a rainy season and rain water gathered near the rubbish. It has become home of various insects like flies and mosquitoes which give rise to various deadly diseases, for example, malaria. Also, Children used to play outside hence there may be a chance that they will suffer from any infections. Moreover, streets are smelling badly and it is very difficult for a person to go out without covering his/her nose and mouth.
I request you to take quick action in order to clean the colony. You should check the duty of sweeper and confirm, why he is not doing his job properly. If, this does not get cleaned immediately then the society has to suffer from great loss.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Flora Fernandas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uitoes which give rise to various deadly diseases, for example, malaria. Also, Ch...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... from any infections. Moreover, streets are smelling badly and it is very difficult for a pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57920792079 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27591977074 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3484153536 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200426367655 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636627118914 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691400878059 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128382294529 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624069144503 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.