You feel that evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter1. Explain why you don't like the current programs2. describe what kinds of programs you would like to s

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You feel that evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.

Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter
1. Explain why you don't like the current programs
2. describe what kinds of programs you would like to see instead
3. explain why these programs are better

Dear Sir/Madam,

Though I have been a long time viewer of your channel, I am off late getting bored and dismayed because of the evening programs that are being telecasted. I find the programs to be dealing with a lot of melodrama and reality shows, which are brain draining and uninformative.

Especially, seeing with a family has become tougher nowadays, owing to the sexual scenes and obscene languages that are used during the course of the program. Instead of the current programs, I request that you start offering scientific, informative and history oriented programs. There would be a...

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Sentence: I am sure, that the crime rates would also drop as people will get lesser instigation which is not currently the case owing to violent scenes often shown.
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